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The Dark Angel Ascended by CoconutFanatic The Dark Angel Ascended by CoconutFanatic
A brand-spanking-new version of Terilis! Every design has been looked at and either drastically improved upon or thrown out the window again. Suffice to say, there is a pile of imaginary designs outside my imaginary window.

Name: Terilis
Race: Toa
Element: Electricity
Mask: Modified Kanohi Komau, Mask of Mind Control. Scope with telescopic vision grafted into the Komau.
Equipment: Gateway Scythe, Shuriken
Attributes: A halo is magnetically fixed in place above his head, and remains almost completely static. It may begin to rotate if Terilis uses large quantities of electromagnetic power. The speed of the rotation depends on the level of electromagnetic output. Two exposed joints behind his shoulders can attach to artificial wings, however, Terilis does not currently have an efficient pair of artificial wings.
PA: Terilis can be shy around new people, and is uncomfortable in a setting where he knows no one. However, with just one friend or trusted colleague he becomes very active and social. He avoids questions about his halo or where he is from, and is lacking in knowledge of standard customs among either the Agori or Matoran.

More pics + theme: [link]

P.S. CRAPPY CAMERA!!!! :iconrarghplz:

P.P.S. I didn't make the Komaku (Komau/Akaku) fusion, :iconmrcod: did. I requested it to be made and bought it. If you want to get one, you can go here [link] to view the masks currently for sale or request your own. This is so I don't get any more comments in which people congratulate me for a mask I didn't make, and so I don't get comments asking me where to get this mask.
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:iconxxsamiamxx:
xXSamIAmXx Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2015
My question is: How did you combine the Mask of X-ray Vision with the Mask of Mind Control?
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:iconcoconutfanatic:
CoconutFanatic Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
... it says in the description. :iconmrcod: made it.
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:iconthegamechap55:
TheGameChap55 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014
Even though I hate it when people modify Bionicle parts, but, this MOC is fantastic with the custom mask! I also agree with st3vethesquid, he should have more blue and silver!
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rigel8789 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
nice mask, did you make it or did you buy it?
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:iconcoconutfanatic:
CoconutFanatic Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Well, I said in the description that :iconmrcod: made it. I did design it though, so thank you for that much.
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:iconthatdudemaan:
Thatdudemaan Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You thinks your camera is horrible! Lok at this shit! Desert-Crawler
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Deadpool7100 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013
awesome build man!!!
i agree with ~st3vethesquid he should be more blue and silver to match the mask! 
but the design is absolutely great!!!!

(suggestions on camera issues)
i would keep the flash off (it might be i cant tell)
and then light the subject with at least 2 lamps (to eliminate shadows)
if the subject comes out bright and blurry (as this one is somewhat) 
you can try diffusing the light by covering the lamps with a tissue or paper and play with the position
if you can get a decent light setup working for you then you can take some pretty good shots even if the camera is low quality!
you can see mine here deadpool7100.deviantart.com/ar… i usually have the lamps further back, hope it helps!

this one here isnt bad at all though!!
its when there's not enough light to see the MOC is the trouble!
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:iconcoconutfanatic:
CoconutFanatic Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Yeah, I do keep the flash off. I use a window on cloudy days to light my photos, and it usually looks pretty good, but I can use a better setup. Thanks for the advice.
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Deadpool7100 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013
no prob! take luck!!!
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:iconst3vethesquid:
st3vethesquid Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Nice shaping on the shoulders, they have great flow. But you should work on the color distribution more, unless he's supposed to be an all-black robot who forgot to put most of his armor on :P
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CoconutFanatic Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Yeah, I will.
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:iconmrcod:
MrCod Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013
Yessssss. You wouldn't believe how many people buy masks and then slap them on to any old color scheme/texture. The whole thing flows quite nicely. It makes me proud that I could contribute to this moc.
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:iconcoconutfanatic:
CoconutFanatic Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Thanks much, I appreciate the feedback. I was planning on owning that mask for several months, so plenty of planning went into Terilis to fit it.
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:iconst3vethesquid:
st3vethesquid Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
You're lucky, MrCod is very critical of mocs :P
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:icontoamicron:
ToaMicron Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
He IS!!??
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:iconst3vethesquid:
st3vethesquid Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
not quite as much as me, but I'm teaching him XD

but yes, moreso than the average builder I'm sure. Though that's not saying too much iykwim
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:icontoamicron:
ToaMicron Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Yes if he saw MY art he'll be like, WHY YOU SO BAD AT DRAWING BIONICLE!!!:D (Big Grin) 
(note: I don't have any deviations yet)
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:iconst3vethesquid:
st3vethesquid Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
well I suppose he'd be better at judging drawings :P
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:icontoamicron:
ToaMicron Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Student Digital Artist
oh whew.WHEWKII. ah ha ha. daft pun. whewkii+mackura! whew! hewkii+macku! makura's gonna be mad!:D (Big Grin) 
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YES THANK YOU!Hug 
 I AM SO HARDCORE:| (Blank Stare) 
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:iconbioghosty4:
bioghosty4 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeessssssssssssooooommmmmmmmeeeeeeeee
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:iconmastersonic920:
Mastersonic920 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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:iconbioghosty4:
bioghosty4 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
cool
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:iconpozolegirl:
pozolegirl Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
cool. XD
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:iconcoconutfanatic:
CoconutFanatic Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I certainly think so. I appreciate that you commented on this :iconbowplz:

I also intend to post some drawings in the future. Hopefully.
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:iconpozolegirl:
pozolegirl Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yea! i like your drawings!
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:iconlouimath:
louimath Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
so freakin awsome...
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ZandurOfBronte Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You did a great job on the custom mask, man!
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:iconcoconutfanatic:
CoconutFanatic Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Sorry, it wasn't me. I got it from :iconmrcod: for ten dollars. I'm going to edit the page so that this mistake isn't made again.
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ZandurOfBronte Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah! You know, I almost asked if he made it, but since he wasn't mentioned, I assumed...

Mr. Cod's a beast, man. I've got a lot of respect for him.
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CoconutFanatic Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
'Tis true, as do I.
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GoldenArpeggio Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013
If I had to point something that could be improved... I would have a hard time... xD My favourite part is the halo, it looks great. However, each of his designs are marvelous, I specially refer to the shoulders, thighs or upper torso. I may differ a bit from other opinions though, I actually like the 'skin-to-wide' look of the legs, including the knees (sorry if I don't explain myself very much =P); and I'm probably the only one that doesn't feel very convinced about the mask...

So, to sum up, magnificent job, my dear! ^^ Are you still interested in give him some clothes? I would suggest a side-cape. Or some wings made from black feathers, but that would be harder to make.
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CoconutFanatic Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I don't know where I could find feathers :p , but I may make a side-cape witha hood for him. A little hood and a cloak that covers his left side, but not his right :meow:
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GoldenArpeggio Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
Cosplay or costume shops. You may find them easier on Hallowe'en or gothic-themed shops. My sister has a pair of decorative black wings that could work perfect for Terilis.

Good idea! =3
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Gale-OneOfMany Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok, so, I've been on a small forced hiatus, life having gotten in the way again, and I log back on with a large sum of messages to sift through, and I happen across this. My jaw, slacked. LOVE this. So much. That left arm looks perfect, bulky yet lithe, and the right has a great mix of smoothness and greebles. That torso is pretty awesome, really like the look the two silver hand pieces make. As far as critique goes, I'd say that you need to bulk up the knees a tiny bit more. They just look odd to me, and far too thin. It's also a matter of preference for me, but I'd say it would also look good if you dropped one of those heartlight stones and flipped it upward so that it was flat on the front. Like I said, that one is a matter of preference, so you don't really have to listen to it, I just think it'd look better. Now, I've been holding it in so that I could get all that out but....

DAT MASK.

Love that mask, and it looks positively PERFECT here. Great order there, I'd say Mr. Cod did a wonderful job with that :D

All around, lovely work Terilis. Really good job here. :iconcoconutplz:
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CoconutFanatic Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
WEll, I'm happy to hear I made someone's facial muscles go kaput. That's the second comment on the knees I've gotten, so I'll have to see to that(But at least nobody has said anything bad about the rest 8D ). Terilis actually has a heartlight underneath the armor that branches out into two separate openings, I just didn't take a picture of it. The green light on the chest armor is just a decoration and an attempt to make it flow back into the main body better. I was seriously waiting to post Terilis just so I could put that mask on him, I knew it would be an eye-catcher, and may draw more people to view this guy. And I rubbed some bacon on him just to make him that much better. :iconrubsomebacononitplz: Thanks for the feedback, it is very much appreciated.

P.S. You gave me the idea to redo the Dat ***(hindquarters) icon, with a bionicle using the same expression and Dat Mask being the icon name.
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Gale-OneOfMany Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YES. Someone needs to do that plz. :iconmatanuismileplz:
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JeremyX2000 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Student Writer
Even though you killed an Akaku and a Komau in doing this, it's not half bad!
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:iconcoconutfanatic:
CoconutFanatic Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
It wasn't me. I requested one from Mr. Cod. It was ten dollars and worth five masks.
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JeremyX2000 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Student Writer
TEN DOLLARS AND FIVE MASKS DEAD?! THAT'S CRAZY TALK!
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CoconutFanatic Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Only four. The first time it had a bigger crack so I sent it back in to be fixed, and it was lost. So he sent me a replacement for free. And the second one(a.k.a. current one) was used with some older and damaged masks, so it's not really bad.
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JeremyX2000 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Student Writer
Well, okay I guess. Just not my style to break masks.
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:iconthatdudemaan:
Thatdudemaan Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You maniac! You destroyed two masks! But the result is pretty cool.
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CoconutFanatic Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
*See above Reply*
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Paragonspar Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
WOAH, NEATOMAGNETO <:Q
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Banjax2077 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
Wow, this looks great! The upper body area is absolutely terrific and that mask looks really good. Although I feel as if the knee area is lacking a bit... But hey, other than that this moc is pretty damn good.
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CoconutFanatic Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
In the back or the front? Or just the knee in general?
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Banjax2077 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
The front, the asymmetrical-ness of it.
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CoconutFanatic Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Ah. I see.
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